Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
You think I am gone. Chasing rainbows in the after, waiting for you so we can cross that bridge.
But you are mistaken. I am here, a permanent tenant in your heart, cuddling and sleeping…and when I wake up, I run around, chasing my tail. That is why your chest hurt so much and you feel the need to cry. But don’t worry, I am just trying to say: Thank you for a place to sleep.
And when the time is right, I’ll run before you, placing little cairns along the way…so you don’t get lost.
Last Friday, we said goodbye to my best friend’s companion. I suspect she took a little bit of space in my heart, too. Sleep, my little friend. ♥
A beautiful story and glad your friend’s dog has found somewhere to sleep in your heart. They are so much part of the family and the loss is great. Your lovely words will help ease that loss.
It’s probably not normal but dying animals seem to upset me more than dying humans. Perhaps it’s because animals are so loyal to us in their lives, unlike most humans we know.
Loré, best laid intentions… it’s taken me this long to get back to FF this week! What a hauntingly beautiful piece (no pun intended) that really fits this prompt! As I watch my 16 year old boy get weaker each day, I can really relate to the sense of loss that comes with saying goodbye to such a sweet friend. Each phrase is perfectly placed and delivers.
In line 5, I think it should be hurtS? Regardless, it does… tenderly.
Thank you, Dawn. I apreciate your visits, no matter how late or early. I know how hard it can be to make our weekly rounds.
It is hard to imagine that one day we’ll say goodbye to those little furry balls of happines, but at least we can give them a great life.
A beautiful tribute.
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Thank you, dear.
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Dear Loré,
I’m sorry for your loss. I enjoyed your sweet tribute to her.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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A beautiful story and glad your friend’s dog has found somewhere to sleep in your heart. They are so much part of the family and the loss is great. Your lovely words will help ease that loss.
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Ah, it is getting crowded, in my heart. Good thing it can expand like the universe. Thank you, very kind words.
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I hear you on the crowding. Mine is more than I would like!
Love the Flower Duet, one of my favourite pieces of music!
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At least we are never alone. 🙂 Glad you liked the music, it is a beautiful piece.
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Indeed
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So sweet.. a dog often leaves before you.. love the tribute, and those little cairns showing the way,
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Thank you, Bjorn. That would be a good way to go, following the little cairns.
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Lovely story. Now the little companion will always be remembered. Well done.
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Yes, she will be remembered. Little rascal. 🙂 Thank you so much.
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You brought tears to my eyes with this… nicely done
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Very kind of you, Sandra.
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Lovely tribute, and I like how you gradually revealed that the narrator is a dog. I’m sorry for your loss, and your friend’s too.
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Thank you, it is much appreciated. We imagine all the things they would say to us, silly humans. 🙂
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You brought tears to my eyes too. Beautiful!
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Thank you, that means so much.
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I thought it might be a dog, or at least a pet, but no matter, I enjoyed the beauty of your tribute.
janet
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Thank you, Janet. Your words are very kind.
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It’s probably not normal but dying animals seem to upset me more than dying humans. Perhaps it’s because animals are so loyal to us in their lives, unlike most humans we know.
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You are not alone.
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Very sweet and touching tribute, brought tears to my eye even before I saw the adorable photo.
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She was a real sweety, thank you.
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So sorry for your loss.
A beautiful tribute, she surely meant a lot to you.
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Yes, she was my little friend.
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With eyes like those no wonder it hurts. Loved how you described love – sadly sweet and sweetly sad.
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What a lovely way to put it, thank you.
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Oh dear. You’ve touched a nerve. We had to say goodbye to our old beagle just a few weeks ago, and it was just awful. Your story is beautiful.
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Oh, Margaret…I am so, so sorry. I hope you are doing better. Thank you for your kind words.
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What a very nice tribute.
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Thank you.
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Whether they chase their tails or not – it hurts to lose a canine friend. Sweet tribute. Lovely imagery in the story.
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Glad you liked it, thank you.
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Powerful emotions depicted very nicely.
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Very kind of you, tnx.
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Very very beautiful. God Bless
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Thank you.
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Beautiful story, and so well written.
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Thank you!
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That’s very poetic. Step down Keats.
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Oh, high praise indeed.
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This makes me tear up (lost a dog last year), but it is also comforting. A beautiful thought that those who love live on in our hearts. And true, too.
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I can’t type today… I meant to say: those we love and lost… sorry
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Thank you so much.
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So beautifully written Lore, and exquisitely painful, my eyes filled with tears…
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We have a sweet spot for our fur friends. Thank you.
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What a beautiful yet powerful bit of writing 🙂
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Thank you, Helen.
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A lovely tribute.
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Thank you.
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A permanent tenant in your heart. ………..nice.
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that’s nicely written
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Thank you.
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Loré, best laid intentions… it’s taken me this long to get back to FF this week! What a hauntingly beautiful piece (no pun intended) that really fits this prompt! As I watch my 16 year old boy get weaker each day, I can really relate to the sense of loss that comes with saying goodbye to such a sweet friend. Each phrase is perfectly placed and delivers.
In line 5, I think it should be hurtS? Regardless, it does… tenderly.
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Thank you, Dawn. I apreciate your visits, no matter how late or early. I know how hard it can be to make our weekly rounds.
It is hard to imagine that one day we’ll say goodbye to those little furry balls of happines, but at least we can give them a great life.
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That was a most fitting tribute to a loving little friend, Lore. Well done. —- Suzanne
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Thank you so much Suzanne.
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