I Remember Everything

Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….

 Copyright –  Sandra Crook

By the next summer my parents sold the house. Senselessly , I thought I could leave both the house and the memories behind.

The way your lips touched my collarbone and your knees gently parted my legs…The imprint of your fingertips on my inexperienced skin and the burns your beard left on my trembling thighs…The slow rocking of our bodies and exploding suns that filled my heart and emptied my mind…

The first time you kissed me, you set my world on fire. Although short on time, we burned brighter than any star in the sky. I wish we were braver.

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46 thoughts on “I Remember Everything

  1. This was beautifully written and constructed. I loved it and think but on a few occasions where I experienced this, but then again, I wouldn’t be where I am today both for better and for worse.
    xx Rowena

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  2. “The imprint of your fingertips on my inexperienced skin” That’s a great line.
    If she lost her first lover because her parents moved house, then she’ll probably carry the pain for the rest of her life. A happy/sad story.

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