Saving Grace

Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….

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 Copyright –   Dawn Q. Landau

Turn around…

Maybe if I follow her for a while, she’ll notice me. I bet she would share a drop of water from that bottle that is dangling off her back.

Thirsty…

It’s been too long since that little boy shared his meal. But his father threw a rock at me. I wonder if the kid will take after him.

Tired…

I would try to make a sound, but my throat still hurts, the cuts from the chain are too deep. Still, I was lucky to get away.

Oh, she stopped…

I never knew human hands could offer a gentle touch.

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52 thoughts on “Saving Grace

  1. Well done indeed! Your story certainly helps me relate to the down-trodden looking dog and takes me through several stages of what it has experienced without telling me directly. I like it. 🙂

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  2. Dear Lore`, Awesome story! I love stories (and books) that start out with the point of view from an animal – “Switch” by Sandra Brown (I hope I remembered the title correctly) I loved. You are so good at penning a tale – honestly grand! Nan 🙂

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  3. Just hopping around to read some of the entries. New to this game.
    Your story is so different from he others I’ve read. Poor dog … animal abuse. Hate it !!!
    I’ve written about child abuse. It came across as a sad photo to me. It’s n ice to meet you.
    Great write !!! : )

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