Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Sandra Crook
Copyright – Sandra Crook
Beautifully crafted
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Thank you, Neil.
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Sensual and sentimental.Excellent.
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Glad you liked it, Keith.
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Dear Loré,
Steamy, sensual and beautifully written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Much appreciated, Rochelle.
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Beautifully written. Full of longing and desire.
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Thank you so much.
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Phew! First rate portrayal of passion.
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I love that phew! 😀 Tnx!
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Hey. I am at work you know. 😉
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I hope all went well. Expect the unexpected. 😀
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LOL.
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This was beautifully written and constructed. I loved it and think but on a few occasions where I experienced this, but then again, I wouldn’t be where I am today both for better and for worse.
xx Rowena
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Those sweet days of first loves when we felt the world was against us.
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Cold shower, I think. Steamily, sensually crafted.
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It wasn’t my intention, but my muse ran wild today. 🙂 Glad you liked it, Sandra.
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The passion of young love is vivid here. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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“The imprint of your fingertips on my inexperienced skin” That’s a great line.
If she lost her first lover because her parents moved house, then she’ll probably carry the pain for the rest of her life. A happy/sad story.
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So glad you liked it, especially that line.
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That was a really excellent snapshot of the pleasure of “the first time,” and I feel sad knowing that she lost him. Well done.
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If only we could go back in time and do things differently…or maybe it is better that we can’t,
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Beautifully written. First cut is the deepest. PS I love the song you included.
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That makes me very happy.
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Her desire and regret leapt from the screen. Very well written.
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Thank you, Iain.
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There is nothing really that is better than the first time…
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I don’t know about that. 😀
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What a beautifully written, sensual story. Where’s my fan? 😉
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Just embrace it, Dale! 😀
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Oh, I am…😉
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Lovely sensual take. Unique and refreshing.
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Much appreciated!
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Steamy stuff, nice one!
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Tnx!
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This is the best ‘first love’ sensual scene that i have read in a long long time that is so well written. I have turned a big, big fan of your writing going forward.
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High praise, indeed! Thank you!
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Makes me want to know more about them, their history.
Beautifully written, as always.🙂
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Much appreciated.
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bold, sensuous and steamy piece of writing.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2018/03/the-villa.html
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Glad you liked it!
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Oh my .. beautiful. Love is ..
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Thank you, Julie!
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Wonderful imagery. So sad they weren’t brave enough.
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Sometimes things just don’t work.
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