Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Sarah Potter
Copyright – Sarah Potter
Melancholic and beautiful. So very well done. Linky not working for some – here’s mine. https://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2017/06/07/hedera-helix-friday-fictioneers/
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Thank you so much, Sandra.
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A sadly beautiful tale of aging. Enjoyed the atmosphere, and am curious to see just what memories are stored in that old desk drawer. Good analogy! 🙂 ❤
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Many happy memories that we come back to once the pain of losing someone subsides. Glad you liked the story, thank you!
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That was beautiful, Loré. I, too, wonder what memories are in that drawer!
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It is a magical desk, it holds the happiest memories of the one who reads the story. Thank you, Dale!
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Sweet!
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Oh, well written!
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Thank you, Sue.
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So poignant.
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Thank you.
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Such a beautiful story .
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Thank you so much.
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Sad, melancholic, poignant. Very well written. I guess the link is not working for some. Here’s mine https://neelwritesblog.wordpress.com/2017/06/07/neelwritesffplant100words07062017/
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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“I left the memory of us in the top left drawer of our old desk.” I love this line, it says so much. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much!
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I couldn’t find your story, could you send me a link?
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Here’s the link https://lifelessonsofadoglover.wordpress.com/
Thanks for asking.
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Lovely piece, reflective and a little sad.
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Glad you liked it, Ali!
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I loved this. It was very beautiful. I remember when my grandmother died, how my grandfather kept telling people the story of how they’d met and he was on the phone to one person for about 30 minutes and then we found out that he had no idea who it was. However, it was good for him to talk about her.
His memory was already going then, but little did we know the time would come where we’d be overjoyed for just a word…a smile.
We have the letters my grandfather wrote to my grandmother while they were “courting”. They are very precious and it’s nice to be reminded of them again. Thanks very much.
xx Rowena
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Thank you for sharing that beautiful and touching story! I am glad my story brought those memories back.
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Simply elegant and poignant, Loré.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Such a nice thing to say, thank you so much!
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‘The improvidence of childhood is replaced with the ever present sorrow of old age’ Very nice writing. 🙂
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Much appreciated!
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That is so sad – the oxygen tank. Our mothers are possibly the only people to love us no matter what.
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Yes, my mother was certanly my hero.
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Beautiful story and I loved the title too.
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Loving and tender.
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Beautiful, especially the very first sentence. Well done!
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The desk may be gone but the memories linger still. Beautiful.
‘Look at it now’ My story.
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Thank God for memories, which can often be bittersweet, especially in the twilight years!
Beautiful!
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This line got me:
The improvidence of childhood is replaced with the ever present sorrow of old age.
Wow, my exact thoughts& sentiments!💐
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Great writing, full of sadness and emotion
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As age catches on the old memories become even more precious.
http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/06/the-accident.html?m=1
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The oxygen tank… a whole story in that.
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With hugs and kisses .. my mum was my hero too. Beautiful post
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A lovely though sad remembrance, Lore. I loved the song you included. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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sweet and tragic.
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