Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Peter Abbey
Copyright – Peter Abbey
How interesting that we both chose the same title
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And I read your story first. Subconscious and all that, I guess…:)
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Wow, great words!
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Thank you, Sue. 🙂
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I like the strong imagery.
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Happy to hear that.
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Powerful and dramatic – I could almost hear the words being spoken.
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Thank you, Sandra.
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Dear Loré,
Wow! Just wow! Powerful and full of emotion. I should leave the prompt blank more often. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That wouldn’t be a bad idea. 🙂 Thank you, Rochelle.
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Great writing, and strangely works for the prompt image as well as the original void that was there 🙂
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Yes, I was happy when I saw the prompt. Thank you!
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Lovely just lovely.
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Thank you, Mike.
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FRom the void we come and to it we will return. We just have to make what we can of in between. A sweet, sad soulful piece, beautifuly done
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Glad you liked it, thank you.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful words, my dear. This flows so well.
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Thank you so much, Alicia.
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I really love this.
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Thank you.
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Powerful!
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Much appreciated!
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Outstanding piece. Great flow.
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Glad you liked it. 🙂
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What everyone else said. Bravo!
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Oh, I am blushing. 🙂 Thank you!
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Interesting that a void is “the measure of disorder”. I agree with the other comments your use of strong words created great imagery.
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Thank you.
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I so wish I could do what you just did. That was most powerful prose. Wow Loré…
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I used to write poetry, have no idea why I stopped. Maybe its time to start again. Thank you so much, Dale.
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It is!
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Great poem. Powerful and quality
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Wonderful feelings and images. Big questions in a compact form.
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Great description of the paradox of our lives!
The words paint the picture so truly!
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Thank you!
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