Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Amy Reese
Copyright – Amy Reese
Fabulous fiction!
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Thank you!
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I don’t know how you’ve managed to cram so much emotion on this! Fabulous as always.
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Greatly appreciated, as always! 🙂
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This is fabulous! I have so many questions! Why was she made? What is she? Why is he keeping her?
I need to know more! 🙂 Nicely done.
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LOL, so many questions! She is an android, he made her to replace a long lost friend, he kept her because she evolved into more human creature which intrigued him…Hope I quenched your thirst for the moment. 🙂 Thank you!!!
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Great idea and so well crafted, with little hints that suggest so much more. Oh, what a glitch in the design that seems to be — but is it for better, or for much, much worse?
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Who knows where it will lead them both? Thank you!
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Stunning. Stunning. Stunning.
I love this beyond words.
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Oh my, I am blushing! Tnx!!!!
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Great twist. That was a fun one.
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Glad you liked it.
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So sad 😦 Marvelous!
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Thank you.
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Ah.. the inspiration already in the title… perfect place for a terminator.
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Title set the tone. And the image was very inspiring.
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That is my sort of story, loved the hints about untold elements.
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Glad you liked it.
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Maybe he’s remade her a little too human. I’m thinking he’s going to have trouble with her!
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Maybe she did it all on her own? Maybe androids can evolve? A scary thought.
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Dear Loré,
Wonderfully imagined. So much feeling in it. Love it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, much appreciated as ever!
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Ooh errr! It sounds like she has a nasty surprise for him!
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It could be nasty or it could be nice. 😀 Thank you for stopping by.
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This sucked me in then spit me out. VERY well done, my dear.
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Thank you so much!
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Superb!
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Thank you!
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So much sadness! Great evocation of emotion!
AshleyDannie
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Your words dragged me and wrung me out. So many emotions brought out by so few words.
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Very kind words, thank you so much.
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Loved the idea of unexpected tears that shouldn’t be possible. This could evolve at so many levels, nicely done
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This is beautifully imagined and rendered
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Thank you, Neil!
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Perfect but still not enough….that say so much right there!
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Indeed, it would never be enough. Thank you, Dawn!
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You managed to write in a lot of emotional depth. I had to reread it before it hit me, and then it came across as really quite sad 😦
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Glad you liked it, thank you.
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Heh. Very blade runner-ish, this asks all the right questions. Great story.
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One of my favorite movies. Thank you!
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Marvelous hook for a longer story, Lore, although this stood well alone. Great writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you so much, Suzanne!
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