Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Georgia Koch
Copyright – Georgia Koch
How interesting.My first throught was to do Charon, but it wouldn’t have matched yours.
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Oh, much appreciated.
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I remembered this from last time. I loved it then, and I love it now. Terrific.
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Thank you, Sandra. 🙂
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Loving that last line!
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Fan favorite, it seems. 😀 Thank you!
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I love your Charon… compassion is not something I would believing him having.
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We all have so many shades in us…maybe she caught him on his good day. Thank you!
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Love that ending 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wow..that’s amazing!
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Thank you, Dawn!
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Excellent last line!
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Glad you liked it. 🙂
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It must have been a good day to die. Styx and stones …. I like it.
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Silver lining in the sea of darkness…Thank you, Tracey.
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Dear Loré,
That last line says it all. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. 🙂
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Great story, great music…both too short -as always.
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Very kind words, thank you.
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Great story. It looks like we took similar inspiration from this weeks’ prompt! I really enjoyed the ‘sins of the father’ angle that you took to the tale!
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Thank you, Nick. Who knows where all these stories come from? 🙂
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interesting change of language in that last line. well done.
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Not very subtle, but what can you do….Thank you!
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some things just can’t be subtle.
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Poor little child to have such a mean father.
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Indeed. Thank you for stopping by.
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Knew someone would write on Charon!
Nice sentiment!
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They call me blunt for a reason. 😀 Thank you!!!
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I really like your Charon. Great story.
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That is so sweet of you.
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Well, like the saying goes, “Beyond these Castle Walls, you’re in the Styx.” Barrump-BUMP! psssh!
I’m sure Charon started using a change machine. Probably got tired of taking the coins out of dead people’s mouths.
Fun stuff, Loré. If I knew my mythologies better, I would have written better stories like this one. Marvelous!
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Yeah, I don’t think I would stick around long. 🙂 Thank you, so glad you liked it.
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I like this Charon, plenty of character and you feel he sees the truth as it is
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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I had another story, a few FF sessions ago, in which Acheron and Charon played a part.
I really like your take on this! Excellent last line!
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This is a new side of Cheron. Good writing, Lore. Thanks for the music. 🙂 — Suzanne
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