Time for another entry in Friday Fictioneers challenge, courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. If you want to give it a try, check the info on her blog. 100 words more or less, inspired by a photo, here we go….
Copyright – Sean Fallon
Copyright – Sean Fallon
What a great take on this photo.
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Thank you!
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Alas… we know this has happened… and will happen again.. those worthless packages do look nice when wrapped don’t they?
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We are suckers for things that are nicely wrapped.
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Great story and one of my all time favourite songs – I’m dancing at my desk 🙂
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Well, that makes me extremely happy!
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Dear Loré,
Business is business. Interesting take on the prompt.
A couple of nitpicking issues. …bad CDOs we can’t sold into new blocks, Should that be we can’t sell?
In the next paragraph there’s some tense confusion. I think you mean check that would rather than will.
Minor points. 😉
Nonetheless a story with sharp edge.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS Wisoff not Wissof 😉
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I will shoot myself! Again with Wissof, I thought I corrected that. I am so sorry, Rochelle.
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Wisoff is just one of those names. I’ve been correcting it all my life. 😉
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“we can’t sold”….lol, what a disaster. Correcting elementary mistakes is not considered nitpicking. Thank you!
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I’m with you, Loré. If ever you see something in one of mine that doesn’t make sense or typo, feel free to point it out! As it is, I found one in my own story this morning.
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Unique and interesting take on the prompt. Well done!
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Thank you!
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We’re going around again then? Different take on the prompt Lore, well done.
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I guess we are running in circles. Thank you, Sandra!
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I think you deserve the bonus, for a great story.
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If only! Thank you. 🙂
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Different take but great portrayal of the cynical, immoral people who infect our lives
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Kind words, much appreciated.
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Your title is extremely apt. Eventually all bubbles burst!
I love the phrase – ‘When the ducks quack, feed them’ – Two dynamic characters, forceful and honest in their dishonesty. Well done…
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Glad you liked it, thank you.
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What monsters! Good story.
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Agreed. Thank you, Dawn!
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What a great take on the prompt! And a telling reality unfortunately.
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Unfortunately, inspired by real life. Thank you.
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Great spotlight on the moments when decisions that rock the world are made
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They are usually made in the off-hand matter, which is really scary. Thank you so much!
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All we need is a new packaging, a nice, official-sounding abbreviation, and a nice line in jargon, and we’re all set to be duped.
A truly imaginative story!
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Thank you so much!
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I could actually see a movie scene in that. Great job, Loré!
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Very kind of you to say that. Thank you!
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Another market crash in the works!
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Repeat.
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Supply and demand… Mike sounds like quite the wide boy 🙂
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Well, what can you do when money starts raining on you? 🙂
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Your vignettes always entertain. Very creative, Loré!
Oh yes, and thank you for the CDO link at the end… I was going to look it up, but you saved me the task.
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Glad it helped. Thank you for your kind words, greatly appreciated.
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What a unique take. You really made me dislike these people, great writing.
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Thank you, glad you liked and disliked. 🙂
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Fantastic use of the prompt, Loré! Have you seen The Big Short yet? Something tells me you’ll love it! 😉 Very clever.
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Yes, I saw it and I really liked it. Thanks so much, Dawn!
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Great little story with a killer last line. 🙂
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Happy you liked it.
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Very good. I love how you responded to the ‘triple a’ notion. A great portrait of two cynical and self-serving characters, and the twisted logic they apply to serve their own ends.
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It was all I could see, that AAA. Thank you so much, Margaret.
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I’m always suspicious of new schemes that are introduced as that great. Too much fanfare. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I agree, always something fishy about that. Thank you, Suzanne.
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